JUST A NOTE TO MY LOVE

By open-minded

We love, we cry, we share, we argue, - we live

And it becomes a given that we are - together.

Together - is not a choice you make once,

at every moment, you should be exactly where you want to be.

I want you to come back when you miss me,

can't imagine saying a harsh word or not smiling when you look my way,

when you want to share your life with me

and can be happy nomatter where we are and what we do.

I won't paint a perfect picture, the world will still crumble once awhile upon us

and it will be hard to briethe but together we will lift it peace by piece...

I can only ask this of you because I'm already here,

and here I'll wait for you as long as it takes.

Call me mad, call me selfish - but I want your happiness and inner peace

and just maybe, you can find it with me being next to you.

Come back when you know you want to be here

and stay only as long as it keeps you happy and at peace.

With love,

Lialius

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago

I love this! Sounds beautifully poetically wonderful! Hope your love agrees!

SEM Pro Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

I've missed you open-minded! So glad you wrote another and it's lovely - truly heart touching! So deep I almost feel as though I stepped into a private love letter...I agree with I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s - hope your love feels the peace and love just reading it! and then returns...

open-minded Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you for the lovely comments.

I found that sometimes you don't even have to be physically apart to feel far away from each other.

I wouldn't dare make an attempt at poetry (English being my second language and all) so I tried to write it in a form of a letter. Poetry often has a lot of hidden meanings or words that I don't use and know well, I wanted this to be very simple.

I think I will experiement on this style some more, it felt good to write down some thoughts running through my head.